Treasure Island

Sandra Martyres

(5th October / Mumbai - India)

Depression (A senryu)


Depression results
When ideas are supressed
and feelings ignored

Submitted: Tuesday, September 29, 2009
Edited: Friday, October 16, 2009

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  • Sonya Florentino (10/15/2009 4:37:00 PM)

    i agree with Dr. Sheth....supression, repression = depression....but may I add, that it can be internal or external (Report) Reply

  • Alison Cassidy (10/13/2009 8:18:00 PM)

    I get the impression there may be a personal dimension to this one. Truth expressed succinctly and clearly. Great read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Twiggy Tubercio (10/8/2009 1:04:00 PM)

    Charles Bukowski once said that genius is being able to say something profound in a simple way, things like this are genius, great write and I love your style (Report) Reply

  • Vijay Menon (10/2/2009 10:32:00 PM)

    you reach the core of the suject and write a few lines which are apt, these lines can be written as a foreword for any book on depression nice and fine (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (10/1/2009 6:40:00 AM)

    yes, you are right, Sandra.Very true..But for me, we don't have to be over sensitive, but just go ahead and look forward for positive approach.
    Nice write..! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (9/29/2009 3:57:00 PM)

    This reminds me of that recent study that came out; the more responsibility and less control you have (in other words, being a worker bee but having no say) the more stress can cause all kinds of problems. Great words of wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Carl Harris (9/29/2009 10:42:00 AM)

    Your senryu on depression could not have been expressed any better, Sandra, for every word you said is quite true. Carl. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (9/29/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    The reason solved before our eyes so true, you hit the nail on the head
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (9/29/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    VERY TRUE SANDRA....SOMETIMES YOUR IDEAS WOULD BE SUPPRESSED WITHOUT EVEN BEING EVALUATED OR YOU WOULD NOT BE TOLD 'WHY? '...AND THAT DEFINITELY DEPRESSES GENUINE THINKING PEOPLE WHO WOULD USUALLY APPRECIATE ANY GOOD IDEA FROM ANY ONE...THIS IS A POWER GAME...LOVELY SENRYU...VERY PRACTICAL...EVERYBODY CAN RELATE TO IT (Report) Reply

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