The death of a friend
Can leave one devastated
Fate is often cruel
Death robs you of friends
When you least expect it to
Anger fills the void
Why do the good guys
Have to suffer and die young
While the crooks survive
life teaches lots of lessons, but some questions remain unanswered. thoughtful Senryu, Sandra love Mamta
This is an excellent senryu triplet, Sandra, perfect in syllable count in each poem, and very well expressed as well. Though not the most pleasant of subjects, you wrote three very impressive senryu poems. Carl.
lovely third verse...really do not know..what god want's to proove
Who can know the secret of this paradox of life? ....Wonderful poem.......10+++++
Why do the good guys Have to suffer and die young While the crooks survive This fact really hurts me too. Great write.10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fate is often cruel...Anger fills the void..You have concluded the first two with strong statements....my answer to your question in the third one is...'they are let alive only to be punished severely....sensible write....and I feel sorry for that friend...thanks for sharing this