Claire Page


Depression - Poem by Claire Page

Depression

Depression depression,
Gets to us all,
We don't know why?
But it's always there,
At some point in our lives,
All we want is for our depression to go away,
The types we have are all different,
But we all wish that the depression would fly away just like angels would!


Comments about Depression by Claire Page

  • Rookie Joseph Harskamp (9/16/2006 10:32:00 PM)

    hm... im not really sure about this...it seemed that you way over abused the comma, makeing the flow suffer. and there seems to be a lack of word choice. a thesaurus helps. keep writing! with all things, it takes practice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 15, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 17, 2006


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