Desire Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Desire

Rating: 4.0


sink yourself into me
let me swallow your needs
and release you to mine
the wind shudders in
your controlled burn
I want to taste the blaze of my fire
tracing the waves
the ebbs and crests
that flow in your eyes
I want to cross the bridge
into the arch of your spine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sensual, wonderful… endowed with apt imagery

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Dr.subhendu Kar 29 October 2007

a versatile yet flinting fire to the desire as it flows in a unique way, well penned as i recommend 10+

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Richard Stilwell 24 September 2005

Oh so lucky the one... Rick

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