persian khushi

Rookie - 120 Points (kashmir)

Desire - Poem by persian khushi

Wantan Soul's desire
A souls desires of fulfillment
And everlasting oneness with love
one true love to join in heavenly tangle of limbs.
kissing eyes, cheeks, nose..
kissing parting lips with sensual passion
merged into one
throats dry with breathing
passions flaring
shivering with inexperienced yearning

Comments about Desire by persian khushi

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/26/2012 12:12:00 PM)

    les célibataires nouvelle de femme fatale.Mervilleux.Merci beaucoup!

    Desires are wild like this always.They know no bounds.So they recur.They have had to.Well written. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Kelly Seale (9/24/2012 1:44:00 AM)

    ok, like a typical man, I go for the passionate poem on my first read of your words... but, unlike the typical... I was not disapointed, Your words Persian Khushi, are very intense and very heartfelt.... passion from every line, every stanza tastes of disire... I'm impressed and I think I'll read more.... Great Ink! ! ! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,361 Points Saadat Tahir (9/19/2012 11:52:00 AM)

    strong and almost aromatic....with pheromones wafting off in the gentle breeze that rises from fulfillment.

    cheers *** (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 13, 2012

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