Detachment Poem by dejen kidane

Detachment

Rating: 5.0


'know thy self'
said he my greatest teacher
breaking me free;
of the out comes
i can't control.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 25 October 2009

That is a good advice...everyone to follow....nice reading

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 October 2009

'know thy self' said he my greatest teacher breaking me free; of the out comes i can't control. know the friends and foe from within and detach your self and humbly seek the blessings....lovely write....10 pse read mione... go back.... pulled from deep sleep

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Alison Cassidy 02 October 2009

My beloved yoga teacher used to speak of 'loving detachment'. Same idea. Same truth. A succinct, perceptive and well expressed poem. Your 'teacher' would approve mightily, I am sure. Welcome to PoemHunter, Dejen. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Quin Faas 02 October 2009

powerful almost enchanting...but the poems truth sustains reality

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