Treasure Island

Vinod Kumar

(kannur-kerala-India)

Devil


Take the Beautiful sky and earth
I don`t want
Stay in the Beautiful Worship places
I don`t want
Enjoy the Devotional songs
I don`t wan`t
Receive the day flower and night candles
I don`t want
Hear the Beautiful bird songs
I don`t want
I want only a small place
In the conjusted human heart
And all buried place darks
And ugly garbage mountains
And hear ear breaking noise
And view eye breaking blasts.

Submitted: Saturday, December 20, 2008
Edited: Sunday, November 13, 2011

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  • Adeline Foster (7/18/2011 3:32:00 PM)

    Could this be a poem to the Biblical dragon? If so, he does not want a little place; he wants it all. He is merely working behind the scenes. Why do you think the world is in such chaos? The real reason for my query is the sixth line, is there not a problem? I am not aware of such a word. Also, perhaps you meant these lines to read ‘want it’.
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/13/2010 1:11:00 PM)

    ‘And view eye breaking blasts. ‘~ Uncommon sensing excellent …flavor and texture is novel and noble … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Vinod-ji
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Linda Hepner (8/18/2010 1:48:00 AM)

    I don't want... how many times we all say that to ourselves... rejecting the goodness and wishing for violence. You got it, Kumar, there's the devil in us. (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (7/5/2009 11:10:00 AM)

    well this is a nice one indeed sir.. very creative, i looked at the title and expected some thing else, then i found this one..the theme expressed in a very unique and different manner sir! ! ! good one10++
    with love
    shan (Report) Reply

  • surya . (6/18/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    vow! what a great poem.great idea expressed in huge emotion.love this poem
    voted 10
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Howard Kern (4/15/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    I think the Devil is a punk also. I think you poked the devil in the heart with a verbal sword. well done! (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (12/27/2008 2:07:00 AM)

    your last line tells it all... tells why life is that bad aound us here...a line 'blasting out' heavily on dark minds...good write good concern yours, Vinod...10 (Report) Reply

  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/25/2008 5:15:00 AM)

    I only want a simple thing
    to live life with peace and zing...........
    Good work................ (Report) Reply

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