Vinod Kumar

Rookie (kannur-kerala-India)

Devil - Poem by Vinod Kumar

Take the Beautiful sky and earth
I don`t want
Stay in the Beautiful Worship places
I don`t want
Enjoy the Devotional songs
I don`t wan`t
Receive the day flower and night candles
I don`t want
Hear the Beautiful bird songs
I don`t want
I want only a small place
In the conjusted human heart
And all buried place darks
And ugly garbage mountains
And hear ear breaking noise
And view eye breaking blasts.


Comments about Devil by Vinod Kumar

  • Freshman - 947 Points Adeline Foster (7/18/2011 3:32:00 PM)

    Could this be a poem to the Biblical dragon? If so, he does not want a little place; he wants it all. He is merely working behind the scenes. Why do you think the world is in such chaos? The real reason for my query is the sixth line, is there not a problem? I am not aware of such a word. Also, perhaps you meant these lines to read ‘want it’.
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  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/13/2010 1:11:00 PM)

    ‘And view eye breaking blasts. ‘~ Uncommon sensing excellent …flavor and texture is novel and noble … thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Vinod-ji
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • Rookie - 57 Points Linda Hepner (8/18/2010 1:48:00 AM)

    I don't want... how many times we all say that to ourselves... rejecting the goodness and wishing for violence. You got it, Kumar, there's the devil in us. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (7/5/2009 11:10:00 AM)

    well this is a nice one indeed sir.. very creative, i looked at the title and expected some thing else, then i found this one..the theme expressed in a very unique and different manner sir! ! ! good one10++
    with love
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  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (6/18/2009 5:15:00 AM)

    vow! what a great poem.great idea expressed in huge emotion.love this poem
    voted 10
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  • Rookie Howard Kern (4/15/2009 6:35:00 PM)

    I think the Devil is a punk also. I think you poked the devil in the heart with a verbal sword. well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie anne adam (1/24/2009 7:24:00 AM)

    your poem is so beautiful and i really like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Fiona Davidson (1/21/2009 1:20:00 PM)

    Good expressive poem Vinu...thank s for sharing it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 496 Points Subbaraman N V (1/4/2009 8:44:00 AM)

    There is no need to feel miserable! A nice creation! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Whitney Nicole Albright* (12/31/2008 1:31:00 PM)

    This is great, vinoduk. I feel the same way. Great write thanks for sharing.10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 233 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/27/2008 2:07:00 AM)

    your last line tells it all... tells why life is that bad aound us here...a line 'blasting out' heavily on dark minds...good write good concern yours, Vinod...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/25/2008 5:15:00 AM)

    I only want a simple thing
    to live life with peace and zing...........
    Good work................ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Danny Archer (12/20/2008 9:38:00 AM)

    really nice profound idea: D (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 13, 2011


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