Difference Poem by Anne Yun

Difference

Rating: 5.0


I leaned my heart on faces of passers-by
They cheered it with voices i could not recognise
Today might be yesterday's shadow before sunrise
When i caught a bird's sigh under a piece of sky

Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: belongingness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 01 December 2016

Well done! Thanks for sharing!

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Daniel Brick 30 November 2016

This is so limpid, luminous, and it casts a light much brighter than its four lines would seem capable of. The bird's sigh is such a tender image, and the complicated image of YESTERDAY'S SHADOW BEFORE SUNRISE is a fleeting moment of beauty captured in words so we can appreciate it fully. And the first line is breathtaking - it shows such openness to experience on your part, such willingness to trust strangers and mirror their goodness back to them. This poem makes a difference to me - the world can be alien and scary, it can be alienating. But the presence of this poem in the world is redemptive. How can four lines be so moving? But they are. You see what I mean that your poem's light extends so far! !

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Anne Yun 01 December 2016

You always give me wonderful encouragements, they're nourishment to my heart. I am home with family now, people in this small village are those sweet passers-by in my life, although what they talk and think cannot provide me a sense of belonging, which the birds the sky can, but they have life, true and beautiful, like the undescribale beauty before sunrise.

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Seamus O Brian 22 November 2016

Today might be yesterday's shadow before sunrise This is the most wonderful line of poetry I have read in the last month. The waters of your mind spring from deep, beautiful grottoes. Bravo! NB :)

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Anne Yun 01 December 2016

Thank you Neal, you're so nice!

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Bharati Nayak 21 November 2016

Today might be yesterday's shadow before sunrise When i caught a bird's sigh under a piece of sky - - - - - - -A beautiful writing dear Anne Yun.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 20 November 2016

A nice piece.Well done.

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