Digging A Hole Poem by Rachael LoudFingers

Digging A Hole



Sexual attraction has killed it all
Emotions have become lost
Happiness left out to violently fall
We both evolve to mindless robots
Temptation has grown too strong
For my body screams, craving yours
Obvious this is pathetically wrong
Yet we come back for more
Wanting something unknown
Temporary satisfaction not enough
Feeling is worse then being alone
Cuz friends with benefits is not love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 27 April 2009

Wise conclusion with poetic brilliance. You can read my poem Lust with refence to your theme. CP

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Nina Bej 30 December 2008

Oh. And the title suits it perfectly.

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Nina Bej 30 December 2008

Damn. I love this poem. Especially the ending, it's so powerful. The only thing I would change is the line 'Temptation has grown to strong.' It should be 'too, ' not 'to.' Other than that, it's perfect!

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