Dilemma Poem by Jahan Zeb
Dilemma
Dilemma
They fight in me my love and your love,
Yours to let you go, Mine to stop you,
What's the most precious? I always thought,
My life? That's the only thing I've got,
If not life then you will be mine,
For I can't have you crossing life's line,
Then what else that will end my hope,
And fasten me to a tree alone with a rope,
There you came with a dreadful wish,
Leaving my pleading hand, my cold flesh,
Requested me to pray for you a loyal mate,
Am I not loyal? I thought alone I sat,
Should I pray for your match? Lose you forever?
Should I pray to have you? Lose you never?
the last two lines are amazing..... its like a quarrel b/w hope and despair. and being poet you r at the other end................ to be or not to be?
A dilemma indeed! So hard to wish someone that you love happiness elsewhere, when all you want is their love in return. I like how you pit your love and hers against each other in the beginning of your poem.
superb.... A real dilemma... Dear, U always play upon ur words like a juggler... Really something that fastens the readers to read till end... The flow is nice... A touching line, Requested me to pray for you a loyal mate. Really daring... Another chissled piece of poetry from U
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4/29/2024 4:41:44 PM # 1.0.0.1119
An advice, don't lose her! ! ! The love is insane, has no way to control it! ! ! Pray, cry, suffer but if not you'll be alone! ! Beautiful! ! ! !