Dirty Poem by Mehreen Mujeeb

Dirty

Rating: 5.0


She lies on the ground
Scratches it to see
She is no longer human
What could she be?

She feels her body
But cannot see
Any sign of existence
What could she be?

She tries to walk
But she cannot get on her feet
They’re tied down
With ropes of ground.

Even though she tried to break free
She is human no longer
What could she be?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 May 2009

She is human no longer What could she be? The last two lines uplifts the poem from ground to sky. A good poem with a feminist touch. Best Wishes Naseer

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Saadat Tahir 28 April 2009

thats a very nice piece good flow...strong idea...deep feeling what else do we want in poetry liked it...its a tenner cheers

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Mehreen Mujeeb

Mehreen Mujeeb

Lahore, Pakistan
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