hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 23,705 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Disciplined move

It is not discipline in movement
Not smartly dressed with fragrance smelt
Not moved in lines as disciplined solders
But seen in line with younger and elders

It is way of life and to fall in line
Everything else should ob on sideline
If needs some improvement or correction
It must be done then and there with action

It is not mere word to be followed
Some concrete action should also be followed
You can not under value or over rate
Else it may seal permanently our fate

That has great impact on personal character
Everybody is important in his life as actor
The decision taken by him is as per ethics
This is one of the important aspect and basic

We are merely guided by divine wish
It has to be met with fine finish
It is certain for us to disintegrate and perish
Chance to remain permanent always diminish

God has everything for all the human beings
That is why some body is poor is somebody a king
We are all to obey His dictates and preaching
It is always in form of advices and teaching

Submitted: Wednesday, February 23, 2011


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