alexus jones

Hello Alexus, y name is Gage Llewellyn... i have been writing music for a while (not publishing) and i have came across this poem... I would like to know if i could use just a few words from the main part... I have the poem written for my song already and here it is: (there are some parts from your poem)

(Verse 1)
How do I mend a broken heart.
When my whole world has fell apart.
How do I start a brand new day,
when the one I love has gone away.
My mind is filled with fantasies,
My eyes possessed by memories.
I knew that you wouldn’t stay
So now it’s time to fly away…

(Chorus)
The disease of your affection
Is me
Your beauty like a virus
Attacking constantly
I long for your attention,
the warmth of your embrace,
the yearning in your eyes
and the smile upon your face.

(Verse 2)
My heart knows to love only you
And now I ask what did I do.
The time we had just flew away
Now I wonder what to say.
Though I cherish all the time we’ve spent,
For you’ll never know how much it meant.
And now I bleed internally,
As if my heart was ripped from me…

(Chorus)

(Verse 3)
How do I mend a broken heart.
When my whole world has fell apart.
How do I start a brand new day,
when the one I love has gone away.
Now I spend each lonely night,
Wishing you could hold me tight,

(Chorus [repeat as many times as necessary])
End

Some parts are from your wonderful Poem... sop if you approve i would like to write that, it would be my best song yet... E-mail me at white_queen_umbrella@live.com or call my cell phone at 360-827-2544.... Thank you so much and it is a beautiful poem!

This is a very sad poem. It is very good, and I must say that I feel your pain. If this came from the heart, then the poetry is great. Poetry from the heart is the best poetry out there. You did a good job. Keep writing.