Disturbance Poem by Indira Renganathan

Disturbance

Rating: 5.0

a Disturbance
Trees around the pond
Eager to look at themselves
Into the clear waveless pond
Lo, a frog jumps in

b Disturbance
Trees around the pond
Eager to look at themselves
Wind helps them to bend, but lo
Pond becomes wavy

Four line Haikus

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2023

Wonderful haiku crafted with wit. Love it!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 December 2023

The wonderful images in the poem make me at close range with the trees around the pond and observe re: Disturbance.

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