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Vidi Writes
(10/5/2009 10:50:00 AM) |
That's being Clever.... than Courageous
An intelligent look into History and Current
Surely reveals whats there in store and not to hop
The one who can adjust in the given carpet
Surely to reap enough yeild.
Better to be aside the fire pan
Than being fried on an open ground
At summer, fire irritates
At winter it warms up
Cool thoughts....
I don't know... how many agree...
But... is a simple fact.
Good subject... good read.
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Moushumi moushumi
(10/5/2009 9:49:00 AM) |
A salute to ur honest feeling & to the poet for a truthful poetry blended with real & reel life....10+++
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Hasmukh Amathalal
(10/2/2009 10:54:00 AM) |
'Jansi Rani'(I call her so) ..
Her clever silence is composed
For her daughters, for their marriage
So not to break her own wedlock.......thoughit makes their postionvulnerable still she hold her positionhighandhold inhigh esteem..we all know it but it is her sacrifice all thetime... graeat salure to ur poem dear.....10
read mine.........makes me bleed.........i may not withdraw
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Hema Ravi
(10/1/2009 4:48:00 AM) |
candid truths expressed in this verse. The state of affairs in many a Indian home. Thanks for posting.
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Sandra Martyres
(9/27/2009 4:26:00 PM) |
A sad but true tale about the fate of several women in our country Indira....well told
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Indira Babbellapati
(9/27/2009 12:02:00 PM) |
story of every other indian wife...one such success story i know is of a mother who held on till the daughter's marriage and at the same pandaal declared to the husband before everyone that she has no more to do with him...
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Kesav Easwaran
(9/22/2009 5:30:00 AM) |
i am able to imagine the circumstances that made a 'Queen of Janzi' out of an ordinary house wife...this work complimentingto your Ability-1 i think...10
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Saadat Tahir
(9/22/2009 3:27:00 AM) |
straight from the heart....
http: //www.youtube.com/watch? v=-ebtjgK8NNU
Bryan Adams.....
u obviously feel alot for this person who has been an icon of virtue and motherhood, , , a beacon for others yet burning itself out...
great touvhing lines....indiraji...
cheers and ten
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