Divorce Poem by Godspower Oshodin

Divorce

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A bond of love has brought them together
love made them known each other.
round metals splitted in both hands
shown as signs of eternal stand
coupled at marriage house
eternally God has blessed this spouse.
once a while they smile and look at each other faces
compromising happiness from different race.
they stood as one from time to time
never representing two at any certain time.
a way has come to join their race
every one will know this family trace.
one put to bed,
the other wait and trend.
some one has come to join blood together
this a heir to mark each other.
smiles wake neighbors coming
all benefitting when returning.
some with eyes of happiness
others engulfed with sadness.
they filled the air with happiness at oneday
tears for everybody another day.
many weeping 'their heir is gone'
spouse hoping 'another will come'
wife dainting to sleepless night
both shrinking to face the plight.
years has count his time to pass
series of problems making two heir to pass.
again joined at the open door
was the wicked way of one tremor.
wife waiting for celebration
husband waiting for inauguration.
neighbors wondering 'why none seems to come'
all sobering to what life has done.
days past, and their plight keeps increasing
weeks past, and their gain keep decreasing.
ways was searched to down this adversity
helter-skelter they run, to fade the temerity.
solution flying to land both gains
togetherness is the corporate of their pains.
ideas tangled by many
what would have happened if they had followed any?
they both sat and find a solution
both affirming to a departing motion.
they walked on different ways in life
all ending in strife.
goodbye my love they both say as they go
farewell song, neighbors sing also.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

goodbye my love they both say as they go farewell song, neighbors sing also. painful departure as they stand separated.... very good wrote i appriciate it....10 read mine divoprce, no separate ways.... buterflies around and mary to marry

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

A nice poem on divorce with the nice concluding 'goodbye my love they both say as they go farewell song, neighbors sing also.'.

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Blessing Nanier 04 August 2008

woah, this is soo. i don't even know what to say.it is written with such talent and care

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Carol Rhodes 03 August 2008

THIS, AGAIN, EASILY DISPLAYS THE BRILLIANCE OF THE WRITER. NOT 'SIMPLY' WRITTEN, BY ANY MEANS, BECAUSE SO MUCH OF HIS ERUDITE PRESENTATION IS COMPLEX. WAS IT THE COMBINING OF THE TWO RACES, THE OBJECTIONS BY MANY OUTSIDE THE MARRIAGE, THE CULTURAL INFLUENCE, THAT DOOMED THE COUPLE? IN AMERICA, ONLY RECENTLY, WE HAVE MANY MULTI-CULTURAL UNIONS. WHY NOT? WE'RE ALL BROTHERS UNDER THE SKIN. PLUS, THE COMBINATION OF RACES IN THE CHILDREN MAKES THEM TRULY EXQUISITE. THANK YOU, GODSPOWER. YOUR MIND IS A TREASURE! ! ! CAROL

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