Do We Really Know? Poem by Ellias Anderson Jr.

Do We Really Know?



Do we really know the messages in our mother's eyes?
Or we just stare at them to say lies?
We think she doesn't understand our lies, but remember, she is so wise
She knows that we lie, she does!

And now, do we think that God won't see us?
OR we like to lie to ourselves. We felt in our own foss

Do we really know how creative a human can be?
In this case we can trust in our eyes that see
But there is much wise in the creation of bee
And there is much benefits and beauty in a green tea

And now, we really don't know about a simple moss
That God has made with infinitive creativity without loss

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i always use new structures for my poem. some will be mixed and some will be transform here directly. this style is an old Persian type named: Tarkib_Band.
hope you like it
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 24 April 2013

I liked the words and the style of your poem. Using the wisdom and all seeing eye of a mother as a metaphor. Nicely done.

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Nader Baheri 20 April 2013

i like the structures you are using in your poems. and this is one of your great poems with wonderful structures and also meaning and theme.i put it second in the list.~nb

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Ellias Anderson Jr.

Ellias Anderson Jr.

Iran, Islamic republic of
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