Do You, Can You Poem by Wendy Thomas

Do You, Can You



Do you notice that I've been crying all day?
Do you notice the tears on my face?
Do you know how much I want this?

Can you please help me as a friend.
Can you please lend a helping hand.
Can you notice my hard work.

Do you care how much it hurts?

Tuesday, August 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,hopeless,lost,hardship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 05 August 2015

I hope your plea is heard, Wendy. Peace

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 August 2015

Well written! Thanks for sharing!

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Soul Watcher 05 August 2015

Profound poem, thanks for sharing

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Allotey Abossey 05 August 2015

Heartily written with excellent tone and diction... Good work friend

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Chuy Amante 04 August 2015

well spoken from the heart!

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