Lynn Marie

(October 27th 1988 / Ireland)

do you remember


do you remember
our first date
i do
you had me out so late

do you remember
our first kiss
i do
its the one ill always miss

do you remember
our first song
i do
we danced to long

do you rembember
our first holiday
i do
i its where i id love to stay

do you remember
our first fight
i do
it last all night

do you remember
our last goodbye
i do
it still makes me cry

Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009
Edited: Thursday, June 11, 2009

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  • Daniel Blevins (9/28/2009 3:00:00 AM)

    this was a good poem......until the ending....which made it great! very emotional and real, great job! ~ (Report) Reply

  • Miranda Van Yperen (8/27/2009 2:32:00 PM)

    aaaww oh my god.... that is a really REALLY wonderful, beautiful, amazing poem i have ever read! ! ! great job.... no one could say that your poem wasn't from your heart.. because it so was! ! i love it, thanks so much for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Shekhar Joshi (6/22/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    ahhhh i never anticipated a sad ending........it was looking such a passionate and sweet poem.......

    excellent poem........ ;) .... (Report) Reply

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