Does Being Part Of A ' Larger Identity ' Make Us Less Lonely? …. [topic Suggested By Savita Tyagi; Medium] Poem by Bri Edwards

Does Being Part Of A ' Larger Identity ' Make Us Less Lonely? …. [topic Suggested By Savita Tyagi; Medium]



A poem by Savita Tyagi, 'A Larger Identity' …….and here I go again.
I THINK I can write of what she writes; I'm not sure when.
What does Savita mean by a 'larger identity" in her verse?
(Sometimes a choice of poetic interpretations can be a curse!)

Well, perhaps not the MOST serious curse I've had.
E.G. wife number two was really, really BAD!
[OK, there I go again making fun of an ex-wife, ….but …
If I can't do that, what can I do for fun in this, my life? ]

I suppose some find solace in being part of the human race,
but …I'd tend, instead, to feel being part of it is a disgrace!
A part of "my country" then? The same at times is true.
Yes, I'm not the biggest waver of the Red, White, and Blue.

My state, my country, my little city where I live?
To none of them would I choose to, my entirety, give.
When I was a church member or a Scout - - -now that was close - -,
but being part of a nuclear** family is what I'd identify
myself with most.
AND a loosely-bound, small group of friends from past and present.
These last two ‘larger' identities usually help make my life more pleasant ….
AND help me be less-lonely.

And there is, of course, our own PoemHunter.com,
with some members who try to mimic my wife, daughter, friends and Mom.
And some, like me, are really wonderful jokesters, and
all-around nice.
And, to some I give, and from some I receive …. advice.

Yes PH helps keep me "not lonely", it is true.
That's why, dear PoemHunter, …..I so ‘love' YOU!

(December 2015)

Friday, June 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,society
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
it is what it is. bri :)

** 'nuclear family'....from college psychology i think, meaning me, my parents, and siblings. i don't mean the countries which have nuclear weapons!
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in case PH doesn't 'do it correctly', the word larger in the title should be capitalized.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 23 June 2016

At first glance me been me thought your PH was a diploma or something, then it dawned on me PH poem hunter, you have a way with words Bri. Annette

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Savita Tyagi 11 June 2016

A nuclear family, a set of friends, and poem hunter friends! that is a enough to have a sense of larger identity for most of us. Of course there are no limitations on how far one can extend it. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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