Dont Let Someone Fall Poem by Boris Barron

Dont Let Someone Fall

Rating: 3.7


A bird in the sky
as small as a fly
has nuthing to say
yet I hear a wisper
it isn't a cherp
sounds more like a sound
I have an idea someway and somehow
the bird as it falls never reaches the ground
cause Im there to catch it and stop it
from hitting the ground
after all that experience I learned only on thing
if someone is falling
than dont be stalling
help them all out
cause in return you'll never even be falling
and if you are no one else will be stalling

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mathew Sutter 04 November 2008

Hmmm... very interesting piece of work, well written and I feel alot of emotion. Probably perseved by experience. Good work! Keep it up! =D

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*Trusting You* 04 November 2008

the best of people dont let someone else fall alone. Becca

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Princess Cum Angel 14 November 2008

heya dear.... your age and talent reall contradict each-other..... well 4 da poem.... very well written.... keep writing!

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coca cola 09 November 2008

That was so cute, I loved it: ] It brang a smile to my face I love the message, you never let anyone fall your a true poet xD keep up the good work

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Carol Rhodes 07 November 2008

Boris, you a true lover of nature and life and I applaud you to the max. You speak so nicely of what I think and love. When you are out and about, you seem to be alert and aware of all that is meaningful and tender. You are special! ! ! You are a recorder of things that so many people fail to see, hear or get involved in/with. Kudos to you! Thanks, Carol

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dark angel 05 November 2008

if you are a true friend u dont let someone fall. that was great

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Melvin Banggollay 04 November 2008

nice piece and I can see you can share more poems of great poetical value specially when you don't rest developing your own style and love the passion of writing from the bottom of your heart. thanks and welcome to the PH, melvin

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