Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

Rookie - 37 Points (11.06.1960 / Philippines Manila)

Dont Say Goodbye On A Rainy Day - Poem by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

dont say goodbye on a rainy day

today was such a rainy day
out in the streets
as well in my heart
these drops pouring
down from the sky
though not wanting it
one pearling tear quite shy
dwelled out of my eye
please dont wonder why
just hate and cant stand
saying always good bye
especially as today
was such a blue rainy day


Comments about Dont Say Goodbye On A Rainy Day by Morhardt Carmen Mencita Monoi Angel

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (10/19/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    please dont wonder why
    just hate and cant stand
    saying always good bye
    especially as today
    was such a blue rainy day

    a great task and sweet poem with rich idea and yes..one should not say goodbye in rainy days..not good habet..this is agood melodic poem with meaningful thoughts..well done 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 61 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (6/25/2008 12:09:00 PM)

    touching poem, beautiful....thanks for sharing 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eldin Van Der Walt (4/9/2008 10:25:00 AM)

    Nice piece, thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 9, 2008


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