Draw Me Release Me Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Draw Me Release Me

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draw me my love
by all means you posses
capture my fancy
like the first rays
of the breaking dawn
pinned to the night clouds
stuff me full
of your honeyed voice
beacon me
just as the paleness of the moon
brings the tides
reach out to me
with hands of vapor that solidify
as they move closer to my heart
breathless and waiting
you envelop me
like the thick humid air
waiting to release its pent wet
so I wait for you
soul bare as my body
waiting for you to come
and release me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 08 February 2007

I am mesmerize by the manner you romantically narrated the emotions in this poem. I enjoyed it. Thank you mam.

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