Dream-Mate Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Dream-Mate

Rating: 4.6


Hold my arm and keep me warm
Spun a wave around the heart
o my pleasure-mate!

If you close olive green eyes
or give up kiss, I'll die
I love you and am afraid
if someday I lose you
How can then I sail paradise
o my soul-mate!

Reach my mind and turn its door
White from blue
o my dream-mate!


Poem 11
Book 'Beckoning Jade-Dreams' April 2007
Copyright Musharrat Mahjabeen
Mizan Publishers, Dhaka, Bangladesh
ISBN 984-8700-82-X

Monday, May 12, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Albalushi 26 August 2008

i really enjoye reading tis lovely peom, wish u all the best

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Love unites all things beautiful and perfect, there is no need to fear. Great piece, thanks! best regards, joan d.h.

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Anna jonson 02 September 2008

waw good poem... enjoyed 10 from me

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Sarwar Chowdhury 13 September 2008

...warming/pleasing/lovely.....................10 oh pleasure-mate! oh pleasure-land! really a fine composition!

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Existential Despair 14 September 2008

What pleasureful read indeed...it makes feel like i'm being saved and taken to dreamy paradise far far away

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 August 2012

if someday I lose you How can then I sail paradise o my soul-mate! .. such a lovely poem.. how will I sail to paradise? will it not breach of promise? what a tragic loss in your demise?

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beautiful reading for a beautiful fear from losing the mate of your mind and the soul...10+++

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Mohammed Albalushi 20 March 2009

Hold my arm and keep me warm, wonderful love experss, i love it

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 05 November 2008

jus' outstanding....no words to say....10...

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Patricia Gale 18 September 2008

A dreamy piece......

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