Dreaming Of You Poem by Cristina Teodor

Dreaming Of You



I dreamed of you picking flowers on a sunny shore,
Continually running with you,
Were the daybreak announcing waking of life.
You were wearing a crown of poppies,
That makes you look so dreamy,
Your hands were picking roses,
But roses, flowers of love prick only yourself,
It didnt let no one to steal their beauty.
Sun rises slowly,
Awakening to life throughout the continent,
But you were awake for long time ago,
By the love that was telling to you a song.
It's song of hope, it's song of life,
It's the happiness of breathing one more day,
It's the joy of being in love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Narayanan Ramakrishnan 18 March 2011

A romantic sojourn from Cristina. I liked it for its verse and flow. Full 10 marks. Narayanan.R

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MRITYUNJAY JHA 09 March 2011

Your this poem weaves dream around the reader.Reading through this poem, i ws transported to d fairy dreamland for sometime.Dream and Love r eternal partners and a ROSE makes this partnership strong, beautiful and full of fragnance.FOR LOVERS even d state of wakefulness is a realm of dreams, and u hv successfully brought this intrinsic quality before d reader. Like ur other poems, here too, D USE OF SIMPLE DICTION AND BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY has given a touch of warmth.A MUST READ FOR THOSE LOVERS WHO ARE BLESSED TO FEEL THE JOY OF BEING IN LOVE!

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Rekha Mandagere 07 March 2011

Lovely dream! i love the tone and rhythm of your poem.

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