Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 17 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

Eloquence Of Truth - Poem by Cristina Teodor

Coming from our experience,
Made of uniqueness,
Truth is the mankind option,
Seeking the truth is a matter of life.

Spoken words are coming to our lives,
Touching us with the essence or the poisson of the content,
After each true word or lie we've hear,
We get sensitized in our hearts and never same again.

Each word will have in us a tremenduous echo,
Each word will make us happy or sad,
True words or lies are part from our existence,
But the most important is the eloquence of truth.


Comments about Eloquence Of Truth by Cristina Teodor

  • Silver Star - 4,500 Points Uma Ram (5/10/2015 11:56:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem with deep insight...thanks for sharing mam. Please do read my Truth...thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 765 Points Stephen W (5/10/2015 6:43:00 PM)

    Some suggestions for a more colloquial English:

    Coming from our experience,
    From its uniqueness,
    Truth is the human option;
    Seeking the truth is a matter of life or death.

    Spoken words come into our lives,
    Touching us with the essence or the poison of their content.
    After each true word or lie we hear,
    We get sensitized in our hearts and are never the same again.

    Each word will have in us a tremendous echo.
    Each word will make us happy or sad.
    True words or lies are part of our existence,
    But the most important is the eloquence of truth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 253 Points Jay L. Morris (5/10/2015 3:36:00 PM)

    I found your poem beautiful. Is'nt truth a bit like an oasis, and the lies- the desert. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,559 Points Kim Barney (5/10/2015 2:37:00 PM)

    It's obvious that English is not your native language, and yet you have managed to convey your ideas and thoughts here admirably. Well done and congratulations on having this selected as Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 134 Points Giedrius Koncius (5/10/2015 6:44:00 AM)

    Interesting poem. It appears as to be written from insight. It appeares that you felt the magic of words suddenly and deeply. Isn't it so, that just some words of enormous variety opens the hearts of people? But what little amount of words, operating truth, makes the same efect with these hearts. Truth is not that thing, which people likes, but it can't be ignored, because sooner or later truth punishes for ignorance. The poet is the person who knows truth and his aim is to find such words through which who opens the hearts of ordinary people to accept the truth. Good luck to you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 406 Points Richard Blay (5/10/2015 4:26:00 AM)

    I love this piece much. Short but deep! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (6/20/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    Realisation of truth is the eternal struggle of mankind. Infinite wisdom is smiling in these humble lines. Dear it is really brilliant :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 354 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/25/2011 4:30:00 PM)

    Truth is the mankind option,
    Seeking the truth is a matter of life................

    mankind yet exit by truth of action
    life still sways abounding in wisdom
    living sees in creativity with alacrity
    eternity spins into space infinite in sanity...wonderful write, thought provoking,10+++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 22, 2015


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