Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 851 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Dreams


do not take drugs
can catch dreams
and dream up -
even If you baffle
and lost your line
rather you can fly a kite
on the blue sky and
imagine you are floating
on drifted clouds

never go to hell
can catch dreams
and dream up -
even if you lost
your love at desert
rather you can
close your eyes
and imagine you
are walking in rain
drops on your eyes and face

never deem die before die
you can hold dreams again
and dream up -
even you are in hell or frozen

rather you can imagine
at winter dawn
you are walking on
a green grass garden
soft dews touch your feet softly

you reach very near a haven
and dream up another dream
for how to reach at harbor
and how you will
enjoy that haven -

- Shaleheen,15th November,2013

Submitted: Friday, November 15, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 16, 2014

Topic of this poem: Hope


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

You reach very near a haven
And dream up another dream
For how to reach at harbor
And how you will enjoy that haven-

Comments about this poem (Dreams by Musfiq us shaleheen )

  • Gold Star - 17,307 Points Valsa George (7/13/2014 2:23:00 AM)

    Never give up dreams.... They help us feel that even in winter we are walking on a green grass carpeted garden!

    Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (12/3/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    dreams are our inner most feeling comeing into play. the past today and future, a lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,894 Points Patricia Grantham (11/30/2013 8:38:00 AM)

    Dreams can remind us of things past and can also bring future
    events to the front. Whatever our dreams maybe hopefully
    it will give us a better perspective about life and loves. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (11/29/2013 12:35:00 AM)

    first i have to say i love this poem alot.this is how my mind really goes my implicit feeling that is infused in this marvelous poem.this is so vivid for whoever wants to get it....IMAGINATION.....~nb (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/28/2013 11:55:00 AM)

    Cryptic poetic dreams in expression. Great to read! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (11/22/2013 7:22:00 PM)

    I like your dream, though I know not what you dream, thanks.
    Please catch me if you can. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (11/22/2013 12:35:00 PM)

    i think with a few word changes...its ok (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Yasmeen Khan (11/17/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    'You are walking on a green grass garden
    Soft dew touch your feet softly'............Nature purifies our thoughts and soul and gives us wisdom. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,965 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/17/2013 7:56:00 AM)

    Dream...dream to do good differentiate 'tween virtue and vice walk on straight path away from wrath thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (11/17/2013 3:13:00 AM)

    uplifting in very beautiful way thanks to share bro (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (11/17/2013 3:13:00 AM)

    uplifting in very beautiful way thanks to share bro (Report) Reply

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