Dreams Do Harm Poem by Kimberley Kerry

Dreams Do Harm

Rating: 4.9


Dreams of a dreamer,
laid out beside her,
Dreams of a waster,
come back to snide her.

Fears of a preacher,
he trys, well to guide her,
Fears of a father.
do but, misguide her.

Sins of a sinner,
laid out beside her,
Scares from the scarer,
laid out upon her.

And with this knife,
this pretty little knife,
She'll end this,
Her all but pretty little life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jacob Courtney 28 February 2009

truly sad and with deep emotion written into your words. Very well done. kimberley.

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Rachel Blank 06 March 2009

Amazing poem! ....I love how all of the words flow into one another...sounds so lyrical.

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Taher Al-Shemaly 09 March 2009

go hiontach. maybe needs a little bit more expansion but it explains well the usual fight between tradition and mentality, freedom and chaos with proposed virtue.

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Sadiqullah Khan 13 March 2009

Good one, keep wrting 10

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Catrina Heart 14 March 2009

pretty nice end rhymes...poignant craft...Thanks 10

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kaitie cicero 06 June 2009

great. i love this one

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keep dreaming my friend..never fear it..an inquisitive and eye opening write..u amazing!

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Honest Heart 14 March 2009

very saaaaaaad...but very nice poem...keeeeeeeeeeep writing :)

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 March 2009

At first glance seems like a horror or psycho movie but in depth very meaningful and sad. Keep on writing.......10. Best Wishes Naseer

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Gordon Wilkinson 14 March 2009

Very deep and sad, straight from the heart where poetry is born - 10+

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