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Patrick A. Martin
(7/16/2009 12:44:00 AM) |
Is there nothing that escapes your observations naseer? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
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Yelena M.
(7/12/2009 12:19:00 PM) |
'Wafts of cologne fragrance
Forming angle after angle
Of lines..'
Your poem is made of the imagery influenced by subconscious ways, very vivid and at the next instant vaguely dreamy pictures as I am reading it through. The architecture and emotion of your dreams is timeless, thanks for sharing with your readers, Naseer.
Regards, Amary.
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Naomi Redfield
(7/3/2009 11:24:00 PM) |
its fine piece. I liked the title of the peom.
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N Olmedo
(6/13/2009 9:38:00 PM) |
I was captivated by the title and the rest of the poem didnt disappoint. Eloquently penned. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. :)
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****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.. ((((((( SiLenCe)))))))
(5/16/2009 5:20:00 AM) |
a beautiful way of writing and a poem which i enjoyed reading while seeing that poet silently watching what all around whie the thoughts passed so deep in his mind...10+++++
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Vilma Xelin
(11/21/2008 9:35:00 AM) |
You must be very sensitive to percibe all this silents stories laying down into the road.... I enjoy a lot your poem! thanks for sharing!
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