Drive From Street Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Drive From Street



Simple things look ordinary
But they are necessary
And form our daily part
We shall never over look over them or disregard

Love shall always dominate the scene
As its power is not fully seen
It can turn hell into heaven
And bring lots of changes even

Love shall win entire world
It can bring peace in its fold
It can end cold war hysteria
The people can breath in entire area

The humanity has always suffered
When care is not offered
It has starved many more
But we have failed to explore

Start the drive from street
Survive and greet
Build real confidence and trust
The people then thrive for and insist

Friday, September 12, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2014

Simple things look ordinary But they are necessary

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2014

Good flow, great message Kent Krauss37 minutes ago Good rhyming scheme, enjoyed it. you just need an e behind breath to make it breathe

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2014

Nice Ahmad Al_khatat39 minutes ago Deep writing Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2014

Simple things look ordinary But they are necessary

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2014

welcome Manish Shrivastav Itm Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2014

Lu-Ann Richards likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2014

different Samantha Tanner38 minutes ago i like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 12 September 2014

very good Jessie Wilson28 minutes ago You do need to work on certain because they just do not go where you have placed them. Also, there are no periods, commas, exclamations, it seems like all you know how to do is press enter. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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