Driven By Lust Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Driven By Lust

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Driven by the trust
Friday,14th August 2020

You are driven by the lust
and lacks the full trust
We do not count steps
as it does not tap love rules

love demands no explanation
as it is a first requirement of the relation
you need not use words of modesty's violation
it happens with the natural acceptance

you are making an appeal
with no love's actual feeling,
is the outer beauty only recognition?
that drive you with the desperation!

I shall willingly step forward
and exchange the words
love has serenity and show
and it must grow with sincerity

love should not be from one side
lovely words can't decide
it must have depth, like an ocean
it miserably can't create the scene

I regret to say
please, stay away
we can't go any further
as it lacks good appeal any more

Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

Driven By Lust
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2020

Poem: 58971243 - Driven By Member: M Asim Nehal Comment: Nice wording, good poem 10+ love should not be from one side lovely words can't decide it must have depth, like an ocean it miserably can't create the scene

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M Asim Nehal 14 August 2020

Nice wording, good poem 10+ love should not be from one side lovely words can't decide it must have depth, like an ocean it miserably can't create the scene

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 August 2020

we can't go any further as it lacks good appeal any more Dr. Jadia Hasmukh

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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