Dry With Dreams And Wet With Ideas Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Dry With Dreams And Wet With Ideas

Rating: 5.0


A walk in the early morning mist
Refreshes me from the blankness of twit
The night left its painful trails
And I catch the morning's gain
Like a rain in the forest, leaving me
dry with dreams and wet with ideas.

Wednesday, October 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,idea,morning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 17 October 2018

I catch the morning's gain, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Kelly Kurt 17 October 2018

I was going to say something about wet dreams, but I thought better of it. Seriously though, I understand the feeling.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2018

A fantastic expression has been made by you on dream and morning having a nice theme. Beautiful poem.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 23 October 2018

Yeah, it is very refreshing taking a morning stroll and new ideas often come to mind. Short and sweet.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2018

Morning is the best time of the day, when the mind is fresh and alert. A walk in the morning adds to the energy and many new ideas spring up with zest for life. A cute six liner poem that rhymes........10

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Nosheen Irfan 19 October 2018

A lovely play with words. A morning walk can really do magic.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 October 2018

And I catch the morning's gain Like a rain in the forest....wonderful use of simile! A beautiful poem....10

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S H 18 October 2018

Great change of phrases, I thought the same way as Kelly did.

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