Earlier I Would Just Stick Poem by Liza Sud

Earlier I Would Just Stick

Earlier I would just stick in you from behind,
but now - my verse has become more careful.
it is gentle, like a ray of the spring thawed patch,
warm as the sunset breeze of farewell.

But no, I lie, I would not stick in you from behind, -
I would run away to the church, where God says: Pray!
Only over selfishness new parts of soul you may find,
and to feel a new life - that is the only way!


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раньше я бы тебе просто сзади вставила,
но теперь - аккуратнее мой стих.
он стал нежный, как луч на весенней проталине,
теплый, как на закате прощальный бриз.

хотя нет, вру, я бы тебе не вставила -
я сбежала бы в церковь, где Бог говорит: молись!
только над эгоизмом новые органы душ раскрываются,
только так начинаешь чувствовать новую жизнь!

Friday, March 25, 2016
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuy Amante 27 March 2016

charity, the pure love of Christ the Mater's approach to all, and our admonition seek and deliver only god-good a warm breeze, kindness, freshness a re-birth

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Daniel Brick 25 March 2016

This is a poem written on Good Friday which has to be good timing! Your first stanza affirms three positive qualities in your poetry: careful, gentle, warm. That's wonderful! Such poems will increase the goodness of the world and protect us from the evil. In the second stanza you rush into the church - What better place could you choose for Good Friday? No better place. I used to attend the service of the Passion Reading but churches in America no longer do that, so I listen to Bach's St. Matthew Passion at home. His music transcends sectarian differences and embraces all of humanity. His Passion music closes with the entombment of Jesus - We have to wait three days and then Bach's Easter Oratorio celebrates the conquest of death and sorrow. Music, as Shakespeare wrote, is the food of love and Easter is the great feast of divine and human love, because Jesus is both God and Man. And as the Psalmist sang, Oh, taste and know the sweetness of the Lord!

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