Earth Is Round Poem by Deepti Agarwal

Earth Is Round

Rating: 4.3


Two souls
Tie a knot
and becomes One,

Strangely

Time flies
One becomes three
and four and, , , , , ,

Arguments, tensions
Difference of opinions
changes that One,
sadly once again,
into Two,
ends, , , , , , , , , ,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 13 May 2008

a knot always has two ends hidden into it! a different poem...a different out look...

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Ranjit Ravindran 19 October 2009

Very True.... blessing & curse in the same pack.

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Mamta Agarwal 27 May 2008

love, hate, friction, arguments, differences, adjustments, making up - this is what relationships are about. be a little kinder be a little blinder to the faults of those around you.family dynamics are forever changing you have mastered the art of compressed writing as yoonoos put it.

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Vidi Writes 18 May 2008

Concept of Family and it’s Love - A Super Art, a Super Music. Oneness between two individuals - A perception to ease the friction A notion to bind the relation It’s music to bring harmony. Part of that Super Concept. People keep too many expectations Reality is to reach it with emptiness I don’t think, many can understand. So… Nothing to worry, no feel bad We are not super human beings If we can live a day’s life, ending with a happy note That’s a super day and super concept.

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Kee Thampi 16 May 2008

she loved to be a mother and Time flies One becomes three and four and, , , , , ,

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Abha Sharma 15 May 2008

Hope this One remains One till the end no matter how many arguments, tensions, and opinions…sometimes when these are resolved life becomes sweeter….nothing is impossible only a mindset is required. A unique thought, woven poetically… Abha

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