Crawling on the
snake like curvy roads,
relishing every inch of
greens all around,
feasting on the fragrance
of the - dissipated wild flowers,
captivated by the cool
clouds touching the skin,
letting my hungry eyes
devour the beauty of the hills,
found myself enchanted
amidst the heavy woods! ! !
~06/10/09~
A real, natural, beautiful feel on a joy-ride....lovely....and thanks for your immediate comment on my poem
as a hill station boarding school student...for very long..these curvy roads and all that greenery used to bring creeps to me...at that time the flat plane and scorching sun used to be my favourites.....it took me very long to fall in loc\vr with a hill station...a lovey journey you takes us on.....10
good lines all through...a write very much refreshing to read...thanks Deepti...10
its nice sweet words written on a subject we keep close to our heart 10+++
This one brings nature right into my heart. A lovely write. Makes me remember of my beautiful childhood when I could experiance these. Now its a mad rush..the nature just blinks past my eyes.
beautiful is all i can say...nature's glory very well captured...regards
i share the love of wilderness with you -your poem makes me nostalgic! it has a classical touch to it-thanks for sharing the exprience.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
enchanting beauty here! fine diction! 10+