Echo Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Echo

Rating: 5.0


As I wake, and the storm clouds
fill my eyes, and I pray for them
to pass by. Wait silently and sigh,
watch the rain fall from the skies.
Listen, to it pattering down. The
sound, as it's hitting the ground. And
the puddles left to ripple around. To the heart
it seeps down, and in an echo, new life is found.

Monday, February 18, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: comforting,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 08 March 2019

Beautifully written. I had the sense of a deep unhappiness accompanied by dark grey storm clouds and the sadness of the rain falling but gradually it seemed that the sounds of the rain turned into a pitter patter that was companionable and rather comforting. We are a species whose deep sorrow can still be comforted. 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2019

Dear Susan, Thank you! .. For such a deeply beautiful and heartwarming reply! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 February 2019

Beautiful description of a few phenomena of nature and their soothing effects on troubles human mind incorporated in this equally beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2019

Thank you! .. Ratnakar, For such a thoughtful and beautifully kind reply! .. I look forward visiting more of your very moving and beautiful poetry! .. Thank you ever so much! .. God bless! ..

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Savita Tyagi 18 February 2019

Lovely nature poem! A pleasure to read. Great is the sketch of nature that has so much power to draw us.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2019

Thank you! .. Savita, For such a beautifully kind reply! .. I look forward to visiting your poetry page! .. Thank you ever so much! .. Ever so many blessings! ..

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