The vows of their silence, echoes
As a screaming hum of nothing
Through the muffled white washed walls
Of a convent wall, of religious housing
Seeming deaf, to the silence of its years
Hearing only, its consistent voice of silence, screaming
From the inside of its muffled incommunicado
They seek an audience, other than their own dreaming
Tongue tied, and mute deaf, to the tears of their sounds
Listening, hearing deep within themselves, mental screams of inability
But silenced by the shadow of the vow, a tongue tied religious dream
Silence echoes, sleeping, whimpering in its own human born fragility
Vows of silence are scribbling in this sharing with interesting view. Fantastic sharing...10
A wonderful poem pin pointing the orthodoxy and it's limitations in religious matters with great skill. A thought provoking write. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
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I would like to translate this poem
Silenced by the Vow.. awesome write... each line so deep and meaningful..As a screaming hum of nothing Through the muffled white washed walls best lines I liked, am adding this one to my favorite list to re-read later.. thanks for sharing.
Thankyou for your sincere words