Eclipse Poem by Robert Eclipse
Eclipse
Rating: ★5.0
Everywhere do the
Cuts run deep, deep
Like the ocean of tears
I'm drowning in, the moon
Painting the ocean, while
Suffocating the sun,
Edging the light away
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Thursday, June 14, 2012
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this is the first poem i am submiting on here it is not the first i have written but it seems most appropriate. disclaimer my last name is not eclipse and it is merely my author name.
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4/26/2024 11:46:49 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I dont get it...why do so many young people want to cut themselves, sorry, just that, read a lot....and I mean alot of peoms about young people wanting to do that particular act. I know Im not a saint but in away Im glad I didnt even think like that when I was that age...or I wouldnt be here....ok being a zombie for most of my life aint the best thing I know but its gotta be better than cutting oneself...least I'm still alive....SORRY...just get so emotional at times. This is an excellent poem by the way...(sorry for ranting like that...sheesh....Im emo too at my age...gah)