Eclipse Of Moths Poem by Aaron Lynn

Eclipse Of Moths



Seekers of the light
Charred by the flare of it's aura
Swirling in nocturnal reverie
In ecstatic pursuit of thy prominence

Wings whip with fury
Circling the lambent
Executing allegiance
To the beacon of insight

Obsessed by the brilliance
Enthralled by the shimmering rite

Wednesday, October 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carolanne Reynolds 10 September 2019

Interesting poem; just learned that eclipse is the collective noun for moths - a surprise. Always pleased to learn. btw, however, you may wish to fix the end of the second line. FWIW, [ it's ] is a contraction of [ it is ], and [ its ], the neuter possessive pronoun is what is meant - IOW, belonging to the moth.

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