I adore her lustrous eyes
Those saphire eyes,
Where I see the surge of seas:
The surge of love in bluish colour,
That wake my frozen heart's fervour.
I always stand at the brine
Of her heart where love is devine;
Where its vibrant waves are chaste
To churn my passionate heart in haste.
I often sail through the streams
Of our shoreless dreams
To see the glow in her astral eyes,
That bewitch my heart in ecstacy.
I am bewitched by this poem of yours....great piece of work...and the rhyming scheme is intact too...
I really like this a lot because I too love this beautiful thing....some of my poems directly involve ecstasy people just got to figure out which ones, good write, very interesting
My heart vibrated upon reading this one. Your love desire has been fully pictured in this poem. She is a beauty and the words in this poem described the love in its splendor...No painting can capture love as you did Vipins. Congrats and continue to move us, to breathe with us and to make us dream with you...Virginia
wow! ! ! ! ! ! what an ecstacy now i forgot my agony! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
wow! ! ! ! ! ! what an ecstacy now i forgot my agony! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Bravo! I take my hat off for you, my friend! Beauty and talent clearly radiate through this amazing write! 10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! R.D.V. from NYC....