Ek Aisa Rishta Chahiye Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Ek Aisa Rishta Chahiye

Rating: 5.0

Palkon ka ankhon se hai jaisa,
Dhadkano ka sanso se hai jaisa
Khusbu ka phoolon se hai jaisa
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera- mera

Chandni ka chand se
sholon ka aag se
Geeton ka raag se
patangon ka deepak se hai jaisa
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera - mera

Paani bin machhli jaise hai tadpe
Badal bin bijli jaise na kadke
bin hawa jaise saans nahi
Bus ek aisa rishta ho tera-mera

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Souren Mondal 14 November 2015

”Kavi ka pathak ke saath ho jaisa wasia rishta chahiye...” Bohut hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai apne Asimji.. Padke bara anand aaya.. Isse hum saab ke baat ne ke liya sukhriya.10 :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 November 2015

Needing such a way of love which should be just like a fragrant flower giving essence. Wonderful poem on love is definitely shared in wise mind....10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 November 2015

Nice elaboration of a wonderful relationship. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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