Elusive Love Poem by Josh Aukins

Elusive Love



She is Aurora's rare light,
transforming the Northern sky.
She is the lone star of night
guiding my floating mind's eye.

She is Aurora's cold tears
on Morning glory petals;
pure as an infant's new fears
but worth more than all metals.
She is hotter than day's peak,
yet her presence still I seek.

She is wonder number nine;
She is everything but mine.






Hepatica........Josh Aukins

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Stunning work....Fresh, tight, and mellifluous structuring.Linage flows like a springfall into a riverbed...Solid crafting, indeed, Josh! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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