Mandi June

Rookie - 23 Points (10-17-81 / Fort Worth, Texas)

Embrace - Poem by Mandi June

Forever in my thoughts,
and always with your grace,
there lies the clearest image
of this; our love's embrace.

The stare with such intensity;
your eyes, the frames compose
to bring upon devotion
that no other can impose.

The magnitude of passion,
that few will ever know,
that's shared between connecting souls
mere words could not bestow.

So, in this lifetime, fortune falls
on only those who will
allow their hearts to recognize
and in them, love fulfill.


Comments about Embrace by Mandi June

  • Paul Reed Paul Reed (7/4/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    ...thats shared between connecting souls... great lines (Report) Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins Heather Wilkins (10/3/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    nice flow, lovely well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (8/16/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem! Love's embrace is the 'clearest image'.
    So, in this lifetime, fortune falls
    on only those who will
    allow their hearts to recognize
    and in them, love fulfill.
    Beautifully said. (Report) Reply

  • Dominic Hunt (7/15/2012 5:06:00 PM)

    Very beautifully written. To embrace is to give all and that is all we can ever really do (Report) Reply

  • Darren David Weaver Darren David Weaver (7/7/2012 1:11:00 PM)

    I like this poem - one must embrace love to be loved. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (7/6/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, flows beautifully and well rhymed. (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (7/5/2012 2:10:00 AM)

    lovely poem, nice poem to read, well presented poetically (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/4/2012 10:01:00 PM)

    Crisp, tight linage makes for a fluxive, mellifluous read...Like the rhyme scheme...Solid all around craftsmanship...~FjR~ (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed Adam Reed (7/4/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    that was the greatest poem i have read in a very long time. you write with heart. keep writing you are very good at it (Report) Reply

  • Jay Aguiniga (7/4/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    I really liked the flow of this poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 4, 2012



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