Mandi June

Rookie - 0 Points (10-17-81 / Fort Worth, Texas)

Embrace - Poem by Mandi June

Forever in my thoughts,
and always with your grace,
there lies the clearest image
of this; our love's embrace.

The stare with such intensity;
your eyes, the frames compose
to bring upon devotion
that no other can impose.

The magnitude of passion,
that few will ever know,
that's shared between connecting souls
mere words could not bestow.

So, in this lifetime, fortune falls
on only those who will
allow their hearts to recognize
and in them, love fulfill.


Comments about Embrace by Mandi June

  • Bronze Star - 2,048 Points Paul Reed (7/4/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    ...thats shared between connecting souls... great lines (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (10/3/2013 3:53:00 PM)

    nice flow, lovely well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,748 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/16/2013 5:22:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem! Love's embrace is the 'clearest image'.
    So, in this lifetime, fortune falls
    on only those who will
    allow their hearts to recognize
    and in them, love fulfill.
    Beautifully said. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Dominic Hunt (7/15/2012 5:06:00 PM)

    Very beautifully written. To embrace is to give all and that is all we can ever really do (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Darren David Weaver (7/7/2012 1:11:00 PM)

    I like this poem - one must embrace love to be loved. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,194 Points Valerie Dohren (7/6/2012 9:11:00 AM)

    Lovely poem, flows beautifully and well rhymed. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (7/5/2012 2:10:00 AM)

    lovely poem, nice poem to read, well presented poetically (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,148 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/4/2012 10:01:00 PM)

    Crisp, tight linage makes for a fluxive, mellifluous read...Like the rhyme scheme...Solid all around craftsmanship...~FjR~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Adam Reed (7/4/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    that was the greatest poem i have read in a very long time. you write with heart. keep writing you are very good at it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Jay Aguiniga (7/4/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    I really liked the flow of this poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 4, 2012



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