thick clouds in the sky
trying hard to hide the moon
I'm under blanket.
these circles of love
spinning, emotional heart
a glass full of juice.
the knife of nature
cut sharp edges of mountains
to make the valley,
Brilliant depiction of emotions tinged with the wonders and mysteries of nature. Top Marks! ! !
First one - Hide and seek in love. Second one- Emotional plea Third one - Separation. Could have been a story
Goes to my fav list now, Very crafty haikus - with three different flavours. Vanilla, Mango and Tutti-frutti...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An outstanding senryu. Love the images!