Emptiness Descends Poem by Ernestine Northover

Emptiness Descends

Rating: 5.0


I've lost him in the clouds
gone from my view,
And however deep I seek
I can't pursue,
This man who was my love
someone so true,
So very much my refuge
my rendezvous.
Such emptiness descends
my world is blue!

If I could fly up high
would he be there,
Looking down with eyes
that show his care,
Remembering the times
we used to share,
There isn't anyone
who can compare,
Such emptiness descends
he's gone elsewhere.

But I will hold him here
within my soul,
And cherish all we had
so I feel whole,
He'll always be with me
and will console,
This hurting heart of mine
which all condole.
Such emptiness descends
what is my role!

I'm out there on my own
I must last through,
For without his hand to guide
I've no value,
To finding my way alone
I have no clue,
Where will I go from here,
what will ensue.
Such emptiness descends
on my debut!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Blakemore 04 April 2008

A very moving piece Ernestine. I was deeply touched by your beautiful words. Andrew x

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R H 11 December 2006

A deeply emotional write, tender and loving. Though 'gone elsewhere', he'll always be in your heart...keep strong Ernestine, you too are in many hearts...Justine

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Duncan Wyllie 04 December 2006

Ernestine what can I say..No one can replace anyone else or any event or feeling or action shared, but we effect eachother, part of Their mannerisms, love of certain people, friends.. lives in you, you see...your Children, Their Children and their Childrens Children, You see we go on.......................... My daughters are different in some ways but in others so simular, Love and life, live on Through their eyes, Love duncan X

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Patricia Gale 03 December 2006

A sadness that has such beauty with verse.

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Tranquil Ocean 03 December 2006

U portray the feeling of emptiness and desolation beautifully....singing to us in well structured verses. TO

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