EMPTINESS
Emptiness is the feeling of no one is in your life
Empitness shows more hidden than life
Empitness feels like no one cares about you
Emptiness breaks you apart little by little
Emptiness makes you cover yourself to be invisible
Emptiness is like a shovel digging your joy out
Just you alone, alone in one place and nothing to do
Empty, empty in your heart
full of hate strong pain
Knocking, knocking, like the beat of your heart
No help, no use, just tears that play the part
Empitiness can be described like a tree
It gives us oxygen but in return
We give it pollution
Empitiness is the sound of a crying baby
Crying for comfort, safety and love from the mother
But how much the baby cries
There is still no mother
But most of all
Empitiness is the feeling
Of giving someone something
From the bottom of your heart
And they don't approve at the end
Empitiness can mean alot of things
To feel empty, yes indeed its wrong
So don't let empitiness sing your song
emptiness can mean a lot of things. good. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Interesting imagery...quite rich but could do with a little more polish.