Empty Poem by David Daykin

Empty

Rating: 4.5


No amount of tablets,
no amount of booze,
no amount of friends,
no amount of love,
no amount of pain,
Makes a difference.

Before the tablets,
before the booze,
before the friends,
before the love,
before the pain,
it was the same.

Nothing, nothing, empty.

Thursday, August 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nothing,pain,sad,sad love,sadden,saddened,sadness,sorrow,sorrows
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was trying to meditate, these words would not let my mind rest, I kept going back to my breathing, but they would pop up again. So Iwrote them down.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elle Hetch 01 January 2018

If only you could feel the impact you have made on others. Lasting & full, not empty at all.

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Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, David. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks..

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