Empty Poem by ASENA MARIE SATAN'S SPAWN

Empty

Rating: 4.0


How can a person
Feel so empty?
When they’re so full of life,
Why does that emptiness come?

Emptiness can destroy anything:
Happiness; sadness—even itself.

To those who feel nothing,
I feel your pain;
Your emptiness.

Emptiness has even destroyed
This poem:
Where’s the feeling?
Where’s the heart?

I guess there’s
Only one word; one feeling
To stay:

EMPTY.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathan Gibbons 10 November 2009

i respectfully disagree...emptiness has not destroyed the poem..at least not for me, the reader...a very good poem about a very bad feeling

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Yonela Mali 25 March 2008

i like this one most probably because i feel that emptyness

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