Silver lining turned inside out
Focused on the charming rout!
Rest a while at the perfect pout.
Empty be the worlds without.
(Islamabad)
(June 15,2009)
A beautiful write Saadat, the worlds become empty and meaningless.... so keep these filled with your sensitive but powerful thoughts! 10+++
Wow excellent theme of the poem, few words make a deep sense.good job sir.
Skilfully composed as always, dear poet friend. Emptiness disappears filled with light of your words.. :) Best wishes. A.
Sadaat, you have said so much in these four lines. master of brevity... empty world, hopeless not even a silver lining- despair and angst comes out so poignantly. 10++ Mamta
Subsubtle and contemplative poem…in compressed colored words… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
A lovely poem with the double message; hope and despair go along together; hand in hand. 19th August,2009 Rehana Nazli
Sorry, don't get it. Your style could be described as beautiful, but obtuse. Kind of a brain teaser, for the initiated.
With less you have cleverly said it all - the hopelessness shines through the angst we all feel today
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well i feel empty, stranded and alone all the time...... this is a nice one Sadaat... you know i read your earlier poems about social injustice and you know your childrens day poem...this one shows that you are a versatile writer..well it is only three lines..but language is beautiful..the kinda language that refreshes our sore minds! ! ! 10++ regards shan