Sigh from mirage of your lips
Mist over panes of my eyes
I fumble and trip over a dream
I’m falling into your absence
Once more........................once forevermore
well...I can clearly see why this is loved by many....something this lovely deserves the praise....nice write
These few words put together with such skill, and reflecting romance in the definity of always needing more....is a talent that you shine in Rehan! love is a never ending trace across our lives, we just have to recognise it as it flies....Loved every word, from the sigh to the rapturous Encore....Waving at you, Tai
Like tripping over a cloud... absence indeed pulls us in closer to what we're missing. Short and yet anything more said would be too much. great job!
very enthralling...and we all fall over with you i believe...its so wistful that despite its brevity it pulls you in for a long time
isn't this an unending process, rehan...for all sensitive heart and minds...?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Absolutely amazing poem, sir. Very touchy. Thank you.